范例12.1 提要
申请者概况
男性，26岁单身，去美国读电脑博士，全奖
拒签理由
单身未婚，有移民倾向工资太低，月薪才500人民币，又有移民倾向
申诉重点
我的全部亲友关系都在中国，难道儿子和父母的关系不够强大到引我回国吗单身无罪，学习有理。26岁读博士的人不结婚的很多，去美国的也很多难道为了一个美国签证就必须娶一个女人吗?这种人也够没出息的我完全可以挣得更多，但是为了出国暂时没有不要以为我就没有能力挣更多的钱(论述我可以挣很多钱的客观可能)中国需要我这个专业的人才列举其他人成功的例子，证明自己必然成功，说服签证官对“我”回国的事实充满信心
范例12.2 原文
Dear Visa Officer ,
I came to the US embassy to apply for a visa on June 20,1996 ,but the officer there didnot issue me the visa. The reason ,as he said ,is "You are 26 ,unmarried. Your salary inChina is 500 RMB. When you go to the US, you will not come back". I think this logicis completely inapplicable to me.
26,unmarried is a very common situation for a young man who pursues a Ph. D. de-gree. Hundreds of people of this kind went to study in the US every year. I have neverheard that a man has to marry a lady before he can get a US visa. He is not responsibleto his own life if a man really does that.
I have no relations in the US. My parents, my brothers, my other relations and myfriends are all in China. I need them, and they need me. They are very important forme to live a happy life ,and I have a lot of responsibilities to them ,especially to my par-ents. Isn't the relationship between son and parents a strong connection?
The salary of 500 RMB for a teacher is not high, but the job is less stressful and I havetime to prepare for the standard examinations and the materials that needed for my ap-plication for admission to US universities. I have spent 2 years of time and 30, 000RMB (borrowed) in it. I think my endeavor is rewarding. I have been admitted andoffered plenty of financial aid by Georgia State University. I have resigned the job ofteacher, full of hone to my future.