Avoid meaningless clich s such as I ve always wanted to... or I like to help people.（避免冗词赘句）
After creating your draft
1. Get your draft critiqued（修改）
Ask for objective feedback. Faculty advisor or the undergraduate advising staff can assist you
with this.
Are you communicating what you wish to say?（是否词不达意）
Does it look professional and well written? Look at grammar, font size, aesthetics, spelling and
format.