Lesson Six: Editing and Revising
Writing is not a one-time act. Writing is a process. Memorable writing comes more from rewriting than it does from the first draft. By rewriting you will improve your essay -- guaranteed. If you skimp on the rewriting process, you significantly reduce the chances that your essay will be as good as it could be.
Once you have taken a break from your essay, come back and read it through one time with a fresh perspective. Analyze it as objectively as possible based on the following three components: substance, structure, and interest. Do not worry yet about surface errors and spelling mistakes; focus instead on the larger issues. Consider reordering your supporting details, delete irrelevant sections, and make clear the broader implications of your experiences. Allow your more important arguments to come to the foreground. Take points that might only be implicit and make them explicit.
Common Flaws
Unlike every other means of evaluation, the personal essay is not multiple-choice, it is not timed, and it does not require auditions or tryouts. You can re-write it hundreds of times and ask everyone you know to read it. Unlike your test scores, grades, and recommendations, you have absolute control over your application essay. Make sure you use that control to your advantage and don't fall victim to the most common essay flaws.
Poor Proofing
Spell checks can't catch everything. Be sure to read your essay for unintended or silly meanings. Take a lesson from these unfortunate essay blunders:
"I am proud to be able to say that I have sustained from the use of drugs, alcohol and tobacco products."
"For almost all involved in these stories, premature burial has had a negative effect on their lives."
"Going to school in your wonderfully gothic setting would be an exciting challenge."