第一段（引言）
起始句："My background as an engineer and a Hispanic affords me a unique point of reference from which a constructive engagement in the intellectual, political, and social spheres at [ ] will be enhanced."
第二段
从出生开始："I was born in Brazil and lived in Mexico City starting at the age of two."
第三段
跳到大学："I pursued an education in engineering taking my Bachelor of Science in Aeronautics and Astronautics from MIT in 1990…"
第四段
转到研究生院："At Michigan, my outside interests gravitated toward politics."
第五段
接着写第一份工作："After graduating from Michigan I worked as an engineer for General Electric Aircraft Engines for two and a half years."
第六段
接着是目前的工作："I left GE because I was dissatisfied with the opportunity for career growth…"
第七段
把我们带到今天：“I was immediately given the duties normally associated with a first or second year associate at a large firm."
第八段（结论）
结尾句："I firmly believe my experiences in law, engineering, civic activity, and political activism will allow me to be a creative and contributing member
of the intellectual life at..."
例4： Career Switcher, Engineer
注意：为了教学目的，该文发表时未加修改。
My background as an engineer and a Hispanic affords me a unique point of reference from which a constructive engagement in the intellectual, political, and social spheres at [school] will be enhanced.