As well as these two major issues, there are some minor stylistic habits you should try to avoid is possible.
×using clichés (陈词滥调)
×using rhetorical questions
×run on sentences (sentences lasting 4 lines or more)
×using the same word repeatedly
×using more than two commas in one sentence
×your entire answer being one long paragraph (no line breaks)
The Conclusion
The conclusion of an essay is where you sum up and offer some kind of overall evaluation. Here, you show your ability not only to repeat the facts, but to use them. Like the introduction the conclusion should be short, preferably one paragraph.
You should summarise your argument concisely - it should follow from the information you have introduced throughout the essay. This is linked to the approach to the answer you mentioned in your intro. At this stage you need to evaluate the results of your approach. Again this depends on the type of question asked,
Question & Possible evaluation :
×Some statement & quote. Discuss
×Discuss the idea that ……
×Ultimately, is the opinion put forward in the statement or quote a valid one? Does the evidence support it?
×Evaluate the theory…..
×Critically evaluate the theory…..
×What are the strengths and weaknesses of ….
×When you weigh up what’s good and bad about the theory, which has more weight to it? Ultimately, is the theory sound or flawed?
×Compare and contrast Topic A and Topic B
×Do they compliment or contradict each-other? Could you use them both together or must you choose one or the other, but not both?
… and finally