范例2.1 提要
申请者概况
大学毕业，在政府的交通主管部门工作六七年， 有比较丰富的工作经验 获得了著名的宾夕法尼亚大学的硕士录取，没有奖学金，全自费，一年三万八千美元
拒签理由
钱太多，将给家庭造成极大困境
花钱太多，你就不会回来（要在美国挣回这个钱）
申诉重点
宾大是一个著名的大学，这个学位也是独特的学位, 在世界上很有名气，非常值得花这笔钱 钱确实非常多，但值得投资
因为学校的名气和项目的名气，学完后对自己有价值百万的前途；
强调自己的明确的学习目的：学成回国赚钱；
进一步论证自己为什么回来：在国内的地位，经济能力，老公的地位；
但宾大学历依然是要的，因为这个学历将给我无与伦比的竞争优势，无限美好的事业前景。
范例2.1 原文
Dear Visa Officer:
My application for a student visa was rejected by your officer. The reason was, according to the visa officer who rejected me "(because that I will spend $38,000 at University of Pennsylvania) I believe that your parents will live under great pressure, I believe your study in America will not be easy, and I believe you will not come back." I have to say that the visa officer at the interview was very nice to me even though he did reject my visa application. I understand and appreciate the visa officer's consideration to my situation, however, I do believe that the visa officer had not considered my whole background of my application before he brought up his above three concerns. Therefore I would like to file this argument and hope you can give me a second chance.